Tuesday, 12 November 2013

One Hundred Word Story- Draft


When I wake, a woman is sitting next to me. Her skin, which seems paler than humanly possible, is washed out further by the flowing white dress she wears. She rubs her hand in small circular motions on my back but I don’t feel it; my body must be too numb. Ugly sobs jolt through me, but the pounding in my head is worse than that in my chest.
There’s a quiet knock on my door, which is gently eased open. Dad.
“Who is she, Dad? Make her leave.”
He approaches me cautiously, as if approaching a wild animal that could bolt at any second. His next words shatter any hope of sanity I have left.
“Make who leave?”

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